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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Awesome Things:
IMPACT
I don't know if you took the picture because you saw meaning behind it, or you thought this would make a great shot, but I think both come into play. One could see the picture as someone making a difference, and being different. Because unlike the graffiti behind what she is drawing, her's has color and life in it. Or how she is showing art and not anything else really.
Originality:
I thought this was quite original =3 I don't know why, but I thought these was taken somewhere poor... I guess it was when I first looked at it the boxes looked like trash >>. But all in all its original ^^ I like it.
Technique:
I guess her not knowing about it was both good and bad, because sometimes the best pictures are taken when the model doesn't know it is being taken. I like her expresion, because it makes it look like she was surprised by us catching her drawing on the walls or something. Its very natural. And its cute how you said she let you keep it because she thought she looked pretty XD.
Vision:
... Looks great XD It seems bright to me, but it doesn't take away from anything, and I think it is just my screen. XD
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Bad stuff:
The boxes drive me crazy... I don't really know why XD Maybe I think they are messy and want organize them or recycle them. But they don't take away from the picture that much either. I guess the boxes help give the feel that she is a light in a dark room? I know they were there when you took the picture.
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Did my best. Not use to curtiquing much photos ><
Wonderful composition in photography! Beautiful color world create interesting atmosphere! Everything breathe with life but also its feel how you taking position on environmental problems that we have here on our mother earth! Every day created more and more trash that slowly destroy planet! And this young person drawing something with green a color that is also kind of symbolic, that new generation take seriously environmental problems and want changes! Absolutely great picture!
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